当你终于有了完整的初稿，哪怕它再难看，哪怕你再不满意，奇迹也会发生：你从“创作者”变成了“批评者”。这时候你才能看清哪里该增，哪里该删，哪里该调，哪里的语言要有诗意，哪里的情节不到位，哪个人物的形象和性格不合适。修改不是修补，是二次创作，是在粗糙的矿石里雕琢出美玉，使之发出光。
There's no drastic divide between this trio. Like the "Father" family, they've drifted apart, seemingly content to have lives of their own. But in this household, their proximity practically itches. Lilith looks for ways to razz her sister, sparking a juvenile sibling rivalry that forces Tim into flushed retreat. But these intrusions and escapes are all in the gentle way of making nice. The tragedy of these moments is in how we can see their urge to connect and their fear to, all in a furtive glance, a choked laugh, or a licked bit of pastry.
（二）公然侮辱他人或者捏造事实诽谤他人的；。业内人士推荐51吃瓜作为进阶阅读
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Thinking Step 3: 推理第二个人。他听到了第一个人的话，推断出第一个人想要。如果第二个人自己不想要，他会说“不”。他说“不知道”，说明他自己也想要，但他不确定第三个人。
Now recovering, Manjit Sangha said her life changed in the space of a weekend，推荐阅读快连下载安装获取更多信息